On Fragile Isle

That running dog across the span of tidal flats,
he’s all we see against the sheen of sliding water.
He could be a Poseidon come ashore,
pulling a sea-cloth from the sea,
his muscles bringing buoyancy to
what passes for fragility on the isle.
The sea remains his oracle, the sky, his sky.

The air expressed is his last gasp.
His breath is running cold.
He runs so fast he must be lost.
He looks at us like we were candy.
There is blood on his belly and back,
still wet, still coagulating. I’ll have
to wash my hands of it when I get home.

This poem offers omniscience of a sort,
like the sky offers blue, like the air
offers a vacuum once you leave the plenum.
It offers a dog that’s running in the sand.
It turns his running into the tides that might
spring forth into the earth’s new engine.
It offers Aphrodite to an antiquated star.

Published by extrasimile

define: extra: excess, more than is needed, required or desired; something additional of the same kind. define: simile: a simile is a type of figurative language, language that does not mean exactly what it says, that makes a comparison between two otherwise unalike objects or ideas by connecting them with the words “like” or “as.” The reader can see a similar connection with the verbs resemble, compare and liken. Similes allow an author to emphasize a certain characteristic of an object by comparing that object to an unrelated object that is an example of that characteristic. define: extra: an minor actor in a crowd scene

2 thoughts on “On Fragile Isle

  1. Thank you again, Glittering. I like seeing what I write through your eyes. Those waves are all over the place. Crashing.

  2. this touched me in so many ways its almost strange.

    “There is blood on his belly and back,
    still wet, still coagulating. I’ll have
    to wash my hands of it when I get home.”

    i think the coldness, the harshness of these words broke the ice. it brought a wave of nostalgia and crashed it onto everything and everyone i’ve ever loved.

    a beautiful poem!
    xx

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